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The Weekend of Death

Tuesday, November 11th, 2008

This weekend was a disaster NaNo-wise. I got up on Saturday full of good intentions, sat down and… nothing. Nothing would come out. I started to force a few sentences and I suddenly realised ‘I have no idea what I’m doing’.

The problem, of course, stemmed from a lack of planning. I had carefully mind mapped and planned the central themes of the book, the beginning, the characters, their introduction and final goals. What I hadn’t planned in sufficient detail was how I was going to tell the middle of the story. I’m unsure of both my characters’ motivations and the time line of events.

Not knowing exactly what was going on meant moving forward was like mentally fighting through treacle. I had encountered the ‘writers’ block’. I had found something similar when writing my thesis. About half way through I suddenly lost track of the overall message by concentrating on the details.

I was a bit depressed on Saturday because of this and had a bit of a moan to Saf. Luckily she had the, obvious but welcome, suggestion of just stopping, sitting down and thinking about it. Work out what was going to happen, to whom and when. Do it away from the computer, away from distractions and without any sense of urgency.

On Sunday morning I had a nice long bath and sorted things out. I worked out where I had to get to to write the end of the book and resolved to just write over the middle and get there. I also came to terms with writing crap. The middle of the book, as I wrote in the previous post, is crap but that’s OK. I know that I can sort it. I just need to get the damn thing feature complete :). Once it is out, re-writing and re-plotting the middle will become a pleasure rather than a chore because I’ll have a full plot set out, in my head and on paper.

NaNo day 10

Tuesday, November 11th, 2008

Current word count: 29,010

Time for bed methinks. I’m only 1k short of 30k but it is time that I got some sleep. Writing went better today with lots of chapters which I had abandoned re-visited and fleshed out. I’m still hating everything I’m writing at the moment but that is because I’m in the messy ‘middle bit’ where all the plot lines interleave. I’m not writing anything particularly clever or particularly funny but I’m getting the plot down. Later on, when editing, I can come back and redo most of the bits I’m writing at the moment.

The thing which I’m finding incredibly annoying is the ‘clunkiness’ of it all. What I liked about the beginning of the book is how things from one chapter would foreshadow things in another. In the middle I have currently, things just ‘happen’ without any prior justification. On the other hand that is the sort of thing that can be sorted out later. Also I need to finalise some of the characters a bit better. They’re not really gelling as an ensemble at the moment.

So that is what is wrong. What is good? Well, the plot is moving, albeit slowly, through the middle of the book and out into the light at the end of the tunnel. Soon we should get everyone to the little village which will be the location for the end of the book and the finishing post will be in sight (both in the story and for the book).

Currently, given the plot progress, I’m estimating that the first draft of the novel will be around 60k. This will in all likelihood increase with editing since all the scenes need more description and grounding as well as the insertion of the foreshadowing. There is also a huge chunk of exposition prose which needs trimming into bits before too long.

Overall thought I’m quite pleased. I had a flip through the book as it stands in the bath tonight and, aside from being poorly paced and poorly written, the actual story is quite engaging. I’m hopeful this turd can be polished into a nugget of nutty delight :).